Question 3: Second draft

Danielle,
I like how you have filmed audience. At one point you show an image of the digipak when you reflect and should do this each time so we don't have black screen and we can understand their comments and yours. Also, they mention short takes- how would a random audience member know this? Do they mean it is boring and therefore editing is not well paced and you needed to vary length of shots to match the music?