Mrs D

Danielle, this is a good start and you have got some good research here. Well done. For you music promo RMAs you explore the narrative and concepts effectively and provide detailed egs. You need to be a bit more technical to improve- although you do start to mention camera techniques it is often descriptive. You need to link to promotion of the star and album too. Look again at editing - one of the most important features of music promos. You mention 'an editing devise' at one point. Define it and explore the effect.