Music promo feedback

When asking my target market about what they thought of my first draft of my music video, they said that they liked the setting of the woods because they felt that it linked with the song and genre of music it is, but they said that to improve I should include different locations and different outfits to make it look like more of a music video and to make it more interesting. They also said that they think black and white may work well for some parts of the video to show flashbacks or for the bits were she looks sad because she is on her own and black and white is quite a dull and sad colour scheme to use and therefore reflects her dull emotions in this particular part of the video. I listened to this feedback and filmed more footage of her in different locations (the cafe and train station) and in different outfits. After seeing the second draft, they said it looked much better and the short takes worked well in matching with the pace of the song. They thought the shorter takes were much more interesting than the long takes of her standing still singing in the same place.